Finals...

Dolby

I like this but it still looks a little plain as the text is only two columns- is there anything that you could add into the double page such as tour dates or album ads?

Dolby

Can you make some brief but evaluative comments as to what you have changed in these drafts and why- it will help with post-production.

I changed the heart to a different colour and size and repositioned it so that it stood out more as a pull quote from the rest of the pink. I made sure it didn't overlap the DPS fold.

I changed the header back to the original design and pulled it accross so that it didn't overlap teh DPS crease. I changed it back to this design because it looks worn/distressed which symbolises the genre of music and the colours still link in with the whole house style and genre of music/target audience. I used a glow around the edge to make it softer and more feminine.

I move the text further left so that it didn't overlap the DPS line

Mrs D

Well done Ashleigh. These are very effective drafts. You have included some good images and you start to show understanding of the key c and cs. To improve, look at the alignment of the devide of the double page spread. Keep up the good work.